I was really amped about posting my new chapter tonight, but worried its getting too detailed. I am streamlining a few conflicts, while weaving around different enviornments. I just want a cohesive ground work with lots of different angles. Kind of how J.K. Rowling did with the harry potter series (I know, real realistic comparison...not); she had all this relevant extenuous details that really built an understanding for a characters overall  life expericen. I want that sort of feeling with my story. Maybe those are just strangely high hopes for a young writer...ANYWAYS, I posted my chapter and no one has really been giving it a gander. Granted, I didn't post it all over the 'share my story' club, but I did get in contact with a few of my most loyal readers. Maybe they have lives, unlike you. Oh, that could be possible too. eek. Damn you subconscious.

I just want my heavy, deatiled chapter to get some buzz so I can finally write some stuff I can sink my teeth into...like attempted murders, chases, guns and kidnapping, oh yes!

For now I am just going to sit here and pout like child waiting people to take a peek at my newest chapter.

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